We had our first creative writing lesson in school this morning- quite impromptu. We have starting reading through excerpts from The Book of Virtues and the poem we read this morning had the nicest personification so I decided to seize the moment and explain what this literary term meant and how to use it in writing creatively. Well, I gave a fifteen minute challenge and here are the very creative writings that resulted. Fifteen minutes- three creative minds- one literary term:
Personification- attributing human like qualities to an inanimate thing or idea.
Personification
by Shea Deagle, age 5 (her very own words written down by mommy)
The napkin never wanted to get dirty. But everybody used him.They wiped their mouths on him and he got dirty. He was upset. He got angry. He cleaned himself off with a wipe. The everybody went to bed. The next morning, he got out of his bed and everybody used him for breakfast so he hid and never came out again.
Inanimate object? A napkin
Human attribute? Wanting to stay clean
Personal inspiration? Daddy (aka Mr. Clean)
The Two Books
A Personification Tale by Jon Langley Deagle
The books lay high in the sky on a little bookshelf.
The two of them talked so well one day they fell-
Their coats were ripped and messy.
They got put back up on the shelf and they were pretty messy.
The clock was blue and it struck two.
The two books were shy and they wiped their coats.
A pack of two came to surprise
To see two books talking while time passed by.
The two told them, "Come, don't be shy. We just want something old to read."
The two books were so happy to be pisked.
They went to Peace Hill and went into a cottage.
The next day the books got read, read, and read. They looked so proud in the cottage.
The two books looked at everything around them. They were the only thing the pair of two read.
The Fair Chair
by Jessica Deagle
The little chair was very fair
And wouldn't stand just anywhere.
Her eyes did roam around the home
For one who looked quite debonaire.
She settled on a strong-backed chair-
With rolling arms and room to share-
Who seemed a comfy place to read.
(Besides, he wore a suit of tweed
And tweed would nicely suit her needs)
She hoped that he would see her there
Beside the fire, looking fair
Her legs quite long, her skirt quite short
(This was the style for the Windsor sort)
Perhaps with her he would consort.
To her dismay one day there came
A small setee with a dainty frame.
The mistress of the house did set
The new setee by the one unmet.
(This made our heroine upset)
That was her spot, her place to be!
Beside her handsome one in tweed
And the new setee, if she knew what was good
Would keep her legs right where they stood
And show no more wood than a setee should.
For hours they sat in their places, unaltered
Till the mistress in her thinking faltered
And decided that the tweed, indeed
Would be a lovely place to read
At the fire alongside the Windsor chair
Who, after all, was very fair.
Once the move was made, her card she played
And a nearby window obliged
A breeze flutterd in, swished her skirting and then
She fluttered her pillow fringe eyes.
The Tweed was quite smitten
Now their tale has been written-
A lesson that all should embrace:
If your fireside's dull, your decor's hit a lull
Don't keep your furniture in the same place!

